Tuesday 25 December 2012

RE-WRITE

Chapter 1
“Today you’ll be starting a new school that is co-ed”.
”Come on dad can’t I just go to an all girls school like I always did, it’s pretty close anyways”.
“No is no Jo, this school is ELITE and prestigious and I bet you will love it”. We had this talk yesterday and you agreed to go to this school until you graduate when your 18 besides you love the uniform since it’s not that bad like you said it would be.
“The uniform is something else but, What if I don’t, I mean like the school semester has already begun and I don’t have any friends going to this ELITE school”.
“Off you go, hurry up out the car Jo and enjoy your day” said dad.  I walked in to this ELITE school and as I went inside it looked so posh and luxurious. “Jodie Mckchoire?” said an old woman with a posh voice. Yeah! What do you want”? I asked. “Follow me, I am the Deputy Head of the school and I’ll take you in to your new class” the old woman carried on. I followed her inside the school, pretty flowers rose from the ground and the window glass looked so incredible as well as the long corridor that looked like a gallery until we stopped to a grey door. “This will be your form class were you will be registered in the mornings and afternoon” Said the old posh woman as she opened the door. Hey Mrs Deputy head, what brings you all the way here, Said a teacher that didn't look quite as old as her. “Well the new student that I was talking about with you earlier is here so the rest is up to you” said the deputy head teacher as she walked out the classroom. I stood completely lost until the teacher told me to come inside... I came inside the classroom as the teacher told the students to be quiet. “Oh it’s a girl” said one of the students. “What’s your name new girl” said another boy student. I stood there thinking OKAY this is not an elite class as I thought it would be. Okay, the new student would only introduce herself if there is quiet in this class said the teacher. The class slowly went quiet and looked at me, so I said “um, my name is Jodie but its okay if you call me Joe my nickname”. That’s all said the teacher, why won’t you tell us what you like and other things. (These people are getting on my nerves I thought, well let’s just put on a smile and carry on) “Okay, I like the color purple, I've never went to an elite school so don’t expect anything impressive from me” I said smiling. “Oh so this is your first time going to an elite school” said the teacher, hope you enjoy fairy high Academy. I smiled back at him thinking this school is so weird and especially this teacher who is totally annoying. Jodie, why don’t you sit next to Vellise at the back of the classroom he said? “ Um no offence ya but who is Vellise sir” I said. “Oh silly me you don’t know the students yet do you” he said sarcastically. What do you want stupid Teach Said Vellise? “Lucky for you Jodie, Vellise is an awful student who always talks back to you, you can sit next to her he said smiling. Okay I said moving to my seat. As I was sitting down a guy came in to the classroom that looked handsome and cool. Shin you’re late you know. Ya sorry ‘bout that sir had to do some duties with the principal he said. Hurry up and sit in your seat. Shin (or this hot guy, maybe this school won’t be as bad as I thought it would) came walking towards me…  

Thursday 22 November 2012

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